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Virgin Suïcide
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since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands

0 posted 2000-09-10 06:39 AM


Well, I am what I am
What you want me to be
So step back and you'll see
The other side that is me

Just a short thing that came up in my mind...

love, Virgin Suïcide


I dream about how it's gonna end
Approaching me quickly
Living a life of fear
I only want my mind to be clear...
~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~

© Copyright 2000 Virgin Suïcide - All Rights Reserved
Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-09-10 02:43 PM


I will never be,
the person that you want me to be,
just open your eyes,
and soon you will see.

Virgin~~~This is really good...This is a part of a poem that I tried to write but just couldnt get the words out...And it was almost like what you wrote...Keep it up girl!!!


~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~


Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
2 posted 2000-09-10 03:16 PM


Yes, the little shorts are nice. I have a name for these kind of poems and i combine them all.....i call them Poetry Portions.
but yea......
hehe ok great work bye!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


Virgin Suïcide
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since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands
3 posted 2000-09-10 03:46 PM


eya!!! Thanks!!!

and ERIN: what is it with us and our poems???

love, Virgin Suïcide...


I dream about how it's gonna end
Approaching me quickly
Living a life of fear
I only want my mind to be clear...
~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~

Ender
Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200
Yuma, AZ USA
4 posted 2000-09-14 05:35 PM


another great poem from you. Have u entered any poetry contests?


*Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender*

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