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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Another poem from.....uh.......3rd batch. Im sooooooo tired. I went to the movies and saw "the watcher" or whatever with keanu reeves. UHhhh i do not recomend it. It's so predictable and plus its simply uncanny how we, the robot minded individuals with great leaps in technology, cannot stop a serial killer with our wonderful utensils of nothingness. I mean, they kept on loosing the guy! Thats a bunch of (*&#(&@ he woulda been caught in like....the first time they were after him.....not the billionth one! But oh well its a movie eh? hahaha sorry just felt the need to inform. Chess: Urine drips away into the sunset As my life wastes away slow. You and I are nothing to be Like a water current in a confusing flow. What exactly am I doing here? A question everyone asks. Just be yourself is one main rule, Yet even the highs of lows wear masks. Nobody knows me or my mind. Something I am very proud of. Name unknown, character in a mist. All i'm doing it turning push to shove. Rudely living in my ways. Nothing serves to stop me. My mind has no fences, and no gates And that's just a small fee. Cheers to those who think a thought Yet dead ends are their fate. Discriminiation is a thought That only leads to hate. Laying here in rose pricks of life Praising my ode of me. We are crowded space in the world As I have come to see. Arts and fashion are well enough. Writing and thinking are under-rated. Reason and logic are trash in a dump. Ignorance and you are but gold plated. Thinking a thought in mind As thought is to express. Souls go on as bodies die Because life is a game of chess.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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LiL'Kay Junior Member
since 2000-09-09
Posts 21Canada |
Brovo Brovo! hehe  that was a sweet poem! and yet very true keep it up ! LiL'Kay |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
great poem. I feel this way all the time, In all truth, most people are just pawns, we are hardly remembered after we pass on, or as hamlet put it: "It is indeed noble that the legacy of a great man outlive his life by half a year." |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Just be yourself is one main rule, Yet even the highs of lows wear masks." A very thought provoking poem and well constructed Javier! Applause to you on striving to be your own entity amongst a world where followers can often be swallowed up amongst the masses. You will go far ... keep up the great writing! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I was reluctant to post up this poem but i'm glad I did....only 6 more poems left to go until i reach the 4th wave...and then you'll see another side of me. HURA!!!! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey Dopey! Your wording is so terrific here. Marvelous....simply marvelous. Give the man a round of applause!!! ~Carly |
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LiL'Kay Junior Member
since 2000-09-09
Posts 21Canada |
!! Stands up and applauds!! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Very good!!!This was well written...And I will give you a round of applause to that!!! ~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~ |
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