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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
ok so some of the poems i will be posting(maybe 2 to 3 of them in the future) i am torn between liking them and then disliking them to a point unbearable..so please just read it and add criticism if needed. burned down rotten disintigrating walking corpse a chrisom pretty thing made of rubiform water falls infirm cavin swallowing plentiful laxatives a simple little peachy whore thinking things are nice dreams are reality and reality is a dream there's too much love to hate there's too much hate to love in everything that crawls and ****s there's too much nothing to do anything and the blatant cries of our insides tell me there's nothing left for you so i go to sleep and bite myself in a cruciform wondering what's inside Now night arrives with her purple legions Retire now to your tents & to your dreams Tomorrow we enter the town of my birth I want to be ready. - JM |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
This left me quite speechless. I am pretty sure I grasped the main point of the poem, and I have to say I really did like this one. Sort of sinister. Great work Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Um…cool! --- Spreading insanity, one post at a time “Writing about darkness comes easily for me. I just close my eyes and write what I |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You know what REALLY pisses me off anomaly? I hate how some people just reply shortly and act as if you were some sorta crazy weirdo. I don't know, i find your work to be so kick ass. I love it. I honestly look forward to it. You're the only poet that i LOOK FORWARD to see post up something. Anything you post up is worth reading, and my time to critic it. I loved it. I love the style, and i just love the words you use. It's great. post more up or face the powers of my internal death wrath of dissapointment.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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