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How Can I Let Go?
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How Can I Let Go? |
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X_me_X Junior Member
since 2000-08-18
Posts 37 |
how do u let go of someone u loved wit all ur heart how do u let go of something that felt right from the start how the hell do u let go? i duno but i feel the need to know how CAN i let go of sumthin that felt so right how can i let go, i dun wanna give up without a fight but i duno if the battle is really worth it cuz if loves in ones heart nomore, u cant really force it but we were so good together what happened to us what happened to the good times, to all the trust? its all gone, great memories we made in the past too bad u had to lie to me, and it could nomore last i need to learn to move on, learn to let go i need to realize that our lives,together,wont grow but how can i live how can i let go knowing that ur love in anothers heart shall grow ~All is forgiven but NEVER forgotten~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
holy! im amazed at how much this applies to me. God! I hate the feeling that i know i have to move on but i cant. i dont know.....anyway...... great job in portraying how you feel....greeat wording.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a good piece, my friend. I know that it can be hard to let go, but sometimes you have to. If you cling to the memory of the past, there's no way you can see the future. Keep up the good work!  < !signature-->If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hears a diffrent drummer. Let him step to the music which he hears, however meausred or far away"-Thoreau [This message has been edited by LoveBug (edited 09-09-2000).] |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Moving on can be hard! This I know, but I also know that it can sometimes be neccessary for your heart to heal with minimal scars. All I can tell you is something I never listened to, and that is, "This too shall pass." And it shall, it just doesn't seem like it right now because you're hurting. Keep your head up, it'll get easier. < !signature-->Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm. [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-09-2000).] |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
hey man i hope you get through it stronger than you are leaving..great poem. Now night arrives with her purple legions Retire now to your tents & to your dreams Tomorrow we enter the town of my birth I want to be ready. - JM |
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