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The Whole World is a Lie
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The Whole World is a Lie |
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X_me_X Junior Member
since 2000-08-18
Posts 37 |
my heart broke when i heard the words i,for so long, didnt want to hear my soul cracked when i finally saw the things i,for so long, refused to see i felt like crying for my worst fears about you turned out to be true i never trusted anyone u were the first one i actually did and now i am left feeling betrayed people told me not to trust u people told me that youd lie but i trusted you neway and i dont even know why how could you do this to me after all that we have been thru i find out nothing u ever said wuz true i find out that every word out ur mouth wus nothing but a lie i should have looked deeper with more open eyes it doesnt matter how much u try and deny u still broke my heart and u hurt me bad u still won my trust and lied to me instead no matter how sweet u were, my trust u still betrayed why did u feel like u had to lie to me i wanna know why why werent you urself, did i make u feel like youd have to try and be somethin that ur not jus to be my friend... jus to gain the friendship that ive got? u were my best friend....and more u were the one love, id never have to let go of u were my angel sent from up above well that is what i thought u were untill u were exposed for the liar that u are and now i regret all that we did share i hope that u know that i will never forgive you i will never come to you even if i do need you i will never ever forget all the things that you did its funny when i look back, its all good times but it wus never true it wus all bull it wus lies i wonder what u had to gain from abusing my trust i shall never trust another and in this letter i jus wanted to let you know its all becuz of you, my distrust and the pain im going thru i feel like the whole world is a big lie for the person i care about the most has crashed my world, i just wanna die ~All is forgiven but NEVER forgotten~ |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
relax, the pain will fade away, like an old scar. "Time heals all wounds." One day, you may not even remember him. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
x_me_x~~~I promise you it will get better!!!Dont think that way as if you could die...I know broken hearts hurt...But one day another guy is gonna come along and put those pieces right back together for you...You wrote a good poem...And just like Jose said "Time heals all wounds"...Just remember that!!! :=YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS:= |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've expressed yourself well in this verse X-me-X ... the pain is strong now, and writing for me, always helped to get me through those tough times. Take care, and hang in there ... the girls are right, time will eventually soften the pain. Nicely expressed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
The poem was great. I loved it, very powerful.  |
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sherm Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 94Evansville,IN |
that poem was great you really expressed your pain well hopefully it will go away soon though (it will, you just have to move on and make the first new, scary steps) Its better to be hated for who you are than loved for who you are not |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
I tell you no lie, a broken heart is devastating, but time in it's own essence can heal even the deepest of wounds, including the heart. The pain will subside,and soon the ache, just a distant memory. A scar shall remain, but that too, with time, shall fade. Keep your head up! I know you'll find the right person when the time is right. We always meet a few wrong people before we can meet the right person, so that we can better understand the one true person for us. Keep that in mind too. < !signature-->Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm. [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-08-2000).] |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I understand... I will not tell you how to feel. You will in time get over this... though you don't see it now. Jenn [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 09-08-2000).] |
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