navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #3 » Nothing(an old one...but It's for Lone Insomniac)
Teen Poetry #3
Post A Reply Post New Topic Nothing(an old one...but It's for Lone Insomniac) Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Virgin Suïcide
Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands

0 posted 2000-09-05 03:44 PM


Nothing

“Keep that smile on your face”,
“Look it from the bright side of life”
How can you look it bright?
When you live in the dark?

Nothing but darkness that surrounds you
Nothing but trouble that you’re into
Nothing but people who don’t really care
Nothing but emptiness that´s around you

When you’re all by yourself
Who is there to help you?
Who comes with the helping hand?
Trying to understand?

No one really cares
No one tries to help
“She’ll be just Ok, nevermind”
But what if I’m not?

What about when I’m not Ok?
When I can’t control myself?
Well, nevermind me, I’m a strong girl
Who’s got it all figured out

But hey, maybe I’m not so tough as I may look
Maybe I’m just afraid
For everything that’s here
For nothing that will come...




"I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..."

Love is hard to live...
Try to live life in love....

© Copyright 2000 Virgin Suïcide - All Rights Reserved
Allysa
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Senior Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden
1 posted 2000-09-05 04:13 PM


Hey, i like this. It's really awesome. and you bring out a good point. I know you probably hear this everyday, but good job and keep up the good work. Is this based on expirence, or have you had a crappy life? Wanna swap stories sometime?
Allysa

Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see.

Jenabou
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA
2 posted 2000-09-05 04:19 PM


this really hit home
its like totaly my life
i really liked it
great work

Love Ya Bunches
~Jen~

        


The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

Virgin Suïcide
Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands
3 posted 2000-09-05 04:28 PM


Allysa: hehe, yeah it's like my life I guess....I'm always supposed to be ok.... guess I'm just not...not much...yeha, love to swap 'em!!

Jen: thnx....

love, Virgin Suïcide...


"I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..."

Love is hard to live...
Try to live life in love....

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #3 » Nothing(an old one...but It's for Lone Insomniac)

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary