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luvnkris
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since 2000-08-31
Posts 144
Perth, Australia

0 posted 2000-09-05 10:22 AM


Kristian!

You…
Are the one I’ve always dreamed of
You…
Are the answer to my every prayer
You…
Are the reason I wake up in the morning
You…
Are the cause of my smile
You…
Are the one constantly on my mind
You...
Are the one that has touched me in so many ways
You…
Are the one who has proved to me that someone does care
You…
Are the one who has allowed me to love
You…
Are the one who loves me for who I am
You…
Are the one to show me there is good on this world
You…
Are the one to show me how a touch can make me soar high
You…
Are the best thing that has ever happened to me
You…
Are the one I am thankful for
You…
Are the one I want to be with for eternity
You…
Are the one I truly love

Now you see what you are to me?




* reach into that heart of yours, don't ignore the dream *

© Copyright 2000 Jo - All Rights Reserved
Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-09-05 11:57 AM


WOW!!!At first I was thinking that he wrote this for you...But I dont know I think Im going crazy...This is good!!!I cant wait to read more...

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~


Jenabou
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA
2 posted 2000-09-05 04:25 PM


this was beautiful
this guy must be pretty special to you..........i hope you give this to him

great work

Love Ya Bunches
~Jen~

                    


The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

Lakewalker
Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
3 posted 2000-09-05 04:42 PM


You...
wrote this very well!  Thanks for sharing it, it was great.  You must really love this guy

Acies
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since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665
Twilight Zone
4 posted 2000-09-05 05:42 PM


He must be a really special person.  Great work!!!

You...
Should write more poems for us to read

As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

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