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luvnkris
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since 2000-08-31
Posts 144
Perth, Australia

0 posted 2000-09-05 09:44 AM


i wrote this in about 5-10mins when i realised that my bestest friend thought that she was losing me!  

I know that somethings wrong
And I don’t know what to do
You say you think you’re losing me
But I tell you this isn’t true

Taryn you must know
I’m here for you till the end
Nothing will ever change the fact
That I’m forever your best friend

Every time you’re feeling sad
I want to help you out
Know that anytime you need me
Just ring or give a shout

Please know I’m always here
To care and cheer you up
Anytime you’re feeling low
I’m here for you my bub

I don’t know why you’re thinking
That our friendship is being lost
Because the bond I have with you
Is worth more than dollars in cost

I never want to lose you Taz
Or for you to think I’m gone
I wish you’d see I’ll always care
You’re my best friend, I’ve sworn

I have a promise to make to you
It’s too powerful to break
Taryn I’ll never not want you near
Advantage of you I’ll never take

Please if you ever cry
Think of me and smile
My friendship with you will always last
Its most important by a mile

Even after many years
I’ll still love you the same
You and me will always be
Bestest buds, yes that the name




* reach into that heart of yours, don't ignore the dream *

© Copyright 2000 Jo - All Rights Reserved
sweetstuff101
Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375
OK, USA
1 posted 2000-09-05 10:16 AM


aaaaawww thats really sweet, I'm glad you have a good friend like that. Great poem, keep writing!

Luv,
   ~*~sweestuff~*~


~¤*¤~iF yOu LuV sOmEoNe, PuT ThEiR nAmE iN a CiRcLe, iNsTeAd Of A hEaRt, BcUz HeArTz CaN bReAk, BuT CiRcLeZ gO oN 4eVeR~¤*¤~



Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-09-05 12:34 PM


Oh this is so sweet...

Even after many years
I’ll still love you the same
You and me will always be
Bestest buds, yes that the name

This is the same way I feel about my best friend...Keep up the good work!!!



~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~


Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2000-09-05 07:26 PM


What a wonderful tribute to your friend LuvnKris! A friendship like this, is a strong bond indeed ... nicely penned!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
4 posted 2000-09-06 02:06 PM


Awwwwww, this is so nice.  Great job on it
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