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Tamma
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In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-09-04 05:06 PM


I don't want to lose him
But they're playing the same game
They always do
They say I'm gonna lose him
If I don't change my ways
I'm trying, but its hard
They always get stuck
In the middle
So, is it me,
Or is it them?
I've finally found myself
A good guy
And they keep saying
I'm gonna lose him
And yet they expect me
Not to cry
Just thinking of life
Without him
Breaks my heart
I'd rather die
Than go on without him.< !signature-->

If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.





[This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 09-04-2000).]

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1 posted 2000-09-04 05:37 PM


Nice poem! I'm sure you'll get things figured out! If not, you're still young and will find many a guys! Keep it up.
As Always
~*~Jessica~*~


~*~If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm.:)~*~

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2 posted 2000-09-04 06:11 PM


Tamma~~~This is really good...And I wish you the best with finding a guy that is good to you...Keep up the good work!!!

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~


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3 posted 2000-09-04 06:45 PM


I *have* found a guy thats great to me...hes a redneck and all, but my family keeps getting involved and I fear I may lose him because of it.

If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.


Erin
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4 posted 2000-09-04 07:12 PM


That sucks Tamma...I think I may end up losing my boyfriend cause of my sister...Shes a psycho and everyone knows it and she cant stay out of our business...And her crazyness is making me crazy...Who cares what he is as long as he is a guy that treats you good!!!
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5 posted 2000-09-05 04:31 PM


sorry to hear that Erin...This is the exact reason that him and his ex broke up, Irvin is a wonderful guy, and I dont wanna lose him cause of my friends or family, if I must lose him, its gotta be cause of something I do myself, instead of my family, or some guy grabbin on me.

If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.


Tamma
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6 posted 2000-10-18 04:50 PM


IM back!!! im just bumpin this some, cause its happening again, but just on his side now. No, im not still with Irvin, but this ones better...if we can keep the "rednecks" out of it.

        

(Can ya tell im happy? i love him and i know he loves me)

If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.



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7 posted 2000-10-18 05:42 PM


Dont let them scare you. He's with you for who you are...how could you possibly loose him for being exactly what he was looking for? Ignore what they say and believe in you guys. I hope things work out great and im glad that your happy! =o)
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8 posted 2000-10-18 06:54 PM


I hope things really do work out tamma.....good luck



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