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Jacman
Member

since 2000-06-27

Posts 291
Dwight Il, US

0 posted 2000-09-03 05:04 PM

Sentiments of the lonely:

The time it takes to fall asleep.
I wonder, do you ever really know for sure?
That dreaming state between asleep and awake,
A lifetime can pass in a matter of seconds.

The thoughts that creep into your mind
when your alone, and only natures voice to hear.
Sheer peace it brings to a stubborn heart.
A gentle breeze, or even a mosquito bite.
It all amazes me.

As sunlight warms accross your back
drifting off to sleep.
The dreams and thoughts when your alone
Behold the sentiments that make us human.

Jason

Just as soon as I belong, then it's time I disapear...
-Metallica-

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

1 posted 2000-09-03 06:18 PM

Beautiful! Very nicely writ.....I would never ever trade that feeling. Solitude is just one thing that we all need, but we seem to mistake it every so often.

Salma

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

2 posted 2000-09-03 07:56 PM

oh my dear Jason, you never cease to amaze me with your beautiful sentiments and thought provoking ideas. You always put a smile on my face. Too bad we live so very far away! oh wellers...I guess we shall communicate the best we are able to. At any rate, this poem was absolutely wonderful! Keep it up my dear! Love ya bunches!!
Love Always
~*~Jess Girl~*~

p.s. I use "Jess Girl" beause that is what everyone started calling me...for some unknown reason, Aside from the obvious I can't figure it out! hehe

Anyways, Luv ya much.

~*~If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm.:)~*~

Deranger
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

3 posted 2000-09-03 10:36 PM

Thought provoking indeed.  Ouch, my poor head.

“Maybe we were once so human, but if we cry, we will rise!”

That’s from some Manson song, does really have anything to do with your poem, but its what’s on right now.

Solitude is like those Flintstone vitamins.  Too many of them turn you funny colors…
Nice work (Singing) lallablah banana.



---
Spreading insanity, one post at a time

“Writing about darkness comes easily for me. I just close my eyes and write what I

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

4 posted 2000-09-04 06:02 PM

Once again you've left your mark upon writing. You have such a unique "dreamlike awe" flow and imagery...I love it.

Jeremy

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

5 posted 2000-09-04 07:13 PM

WoW, Jason! (Jac) This is wonderful! My two favorite types of poetry are thought provoking and funny. You are a master at both! This one leaves me feeling mystical. It's wierd, like I know exactly what you're talking about yet it still seems so mysterious. Okay, enough of my rambling. You rock! (oh yeah, I already told everyone about your GI-Joes.....sorry)

*~Meredith~*

I'll just keep on laughing,
Hiding the tears in my eyes...
*Oleander

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

6 posted 2000-09-05 06:09 AM

I love these thoughts and questions Jason, leaves my mind spinning sometimes when I get on this tangent in my own mind. Great read!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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