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Deranger
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0 posted 2000-09-03 06:31 AM



This is dedicated to Michelle, that wonderfully crazy babe (:
Warning:  I wrote this at three AM!  I’m buzzing around like a fly on Prozac! Lalananahlablah!

Radioactive Watermelon Seeds (A song dedicated to AngelShell)  

Ok, let me tell you something about Shell,
She’s havin’ a hard time, said it was hell,
So I’m here to do anything I could,
Problem is, I don’t know anything I should,

Yeah yeah, and she likes her showers,
Yeah yeah, and she likes to chat for hours,

I try to talk some sense to her,
But I was talking in slur,
But you see, I was (A little) drunk,
Hehe, and it all came out a blur,

Yeah, yeah, and she likes her showers,
Yeah, yeah, and she likes to chat for hours,

She lives on the island surrounded by water,
Yeah yeah, with the sheep and the slaughter,
With the school that taught her,
Yeah yeah, she’s the only daughter,

Yeah nah nah, and she’s rare,
I know for what she does care,
She’s reaching out for something, yeah yeah,
Yeah but it just ain’t there,

Yeah yeah, and I’d like to bring her flowers,
Yeah yeah, and we like to talk for hours,

Yeah yeah, but she don’t know the price,
Nah nah, she’d pay it anyway,
And she doesn’t know what to say,
Yeah yeah, and she doesn’t want to betray,

Yeah yeah, she’s a ray of sunshine,
Yeah yeah, and she’s having a hard time,

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Enjoy babe....
Need sleep...uh...mmm, Nightquil...




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“Writing about darkness comes easily for me. I just close my eyes and write what I

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Jenabou
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since 2000-06-13
Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA
1 posted 2000-09-03 10:21 AM


this was so cute
what an incrediably sweet thing to do for her
great work im sure she'll love it and appreciate it!!!
i know it would make me feel better  

Love Ya Bunches
~Jen~

        


The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

Isabel Galaxia
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since 2000-06-18
Posts 733

2 posted 2000-09-03 02:40 PM


That is so sweet!!  I'm impressed.  That's so good!  Question...where did you get the name from?  Okay well great poem, especially for 3 am!!  Keep it up!
Bel


Beautiful is empty
Beautiful is free
Beautiful loves no one
Beautiful stripped me
-"Beautiful" CREED

LyricFetish
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
3 posted 2000-09-03 02:54 PM


Well, you're title hooked me! Very, very cute. Anyway, this is a very sweet thing to write for your woman. You're a saint. Later!

*~Meredith~*

I'll just keep on laughing,
Hiding the tears in my eyes...
*Oleander

Jacman
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since 2000-06-27
Posts 291
Dwight Il, US
4 posted 2000-09-03 05:49 PM


Dude I read your work and I emediately think of pain Killers.lol.  Seriously though, I don't care what anyone else says, not that they're talking bad, but I think you are a genious in your own right.  Just don't forget about that fine line between genious and insanity Einstein.  ;-

jason

Just as soon as I belong, then it's time I disapear...
-Metallica-

Salooma
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since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

5 posted 2000-09-03 06:06 PM


I must say this is the sweetest possible....very nice!   Just lay down the Prozac and get some more sleep.... I'm sure your poems will have a better effect on you while awake. LOL Thanks for sharing this!

Salma  

StarPryncess17
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since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
6 posted 2000-09-03 08:38 PM


OK, so I must admit, you make me laugh my ass off! But in all sincerity, it's very sweet of you to dedicate this to her!! So endearing. Wish someone was inspired by me...hehehe. And as for the genius thing, you have got to be close. You may be half way insane, but hey, I am too!! And Pain killers (yummmers! haha Jason) well let's just say they're appealing but you must cut back my dear. Oh yes, and the altoids also!! hehe. Keep it up, you're a creative genius! Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~

~*~If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm.:)~*~

Deranger
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since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there
7 posted 2000-09-03 11:12 PM


Wow!  I’m blushing, really I am, this is so embarrassing…

Jenabou: Cute, aww, you don’t say…Oh, you mean the song? hehe  

Isabel Galaxia:  Thanks…as for your question, I’m not really sure.  It seems really familiar, jeez I hope I didn’t steal it from someone…Guess I don’t think so well at 3am…hehe

LyricFetish:   A saint?  Hehe, maybe next life…

Jacman:  Mmm, painkillers…Yes, the line between genius and insanity is quite fine…and I am dancing the on it.  Lalalablahbanana.

Salooma:  Your name is fun to say…SALOOMA!  Hehe, sorry…NO, THE PROZAC IS MY FRIEND!  Hahahaehemuahahhaa!

StarPryncess17:  I’m sure you’ve inspired many with your words!  And I am not cutting back on Altoids!  Hehe.

Thanks everyone…now I just have to wait for Miss Shelly to read this…stupid 20 hour time delay…

lalablahbananah,


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Spreading insanity, one post at a time

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AngelShell
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since 2000-03-01
Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...
8 posted 2000-09-04 12:27 PM


Hey Babe,
Oh my god, I read this after an extremely hard day at school and I truely smiled for the first time today...

You are truely a genuis in the making - stick with me and you'll go far (lol, I guess that should be the other way round, but we can't let them know you're the real brains behind this friendship!)

And like I said before, if in heaven they tell you you can be a muse to anyone you want...choose my screwed up brain and I'll love you forever!!!

Love ya Babe


Beautiful is empty
Beautiful is free
Beautiful loves no one
Beautiful stripped me
~Beautiful~
~Creed~

Lovely_Kris
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 176

9 posted 2000-09-05 04:45 PM


I think this is a  great poem and I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing this poem and keep up the great work and hope to read more.
Lovely_Kris

silentsky
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 114

10 posted 2000-09-06 01:19 AM


made me smile. so sweet.
im jealous.
shira

thebeautybrat
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since 2000-03-30
Posts 114
Florida
11 posted 2000-09-07 05:31 PM


very interesting. too bad i don't know the tune to the song so i could sing it!! hehe i liked this a lot!!

When you love someone write their name in a circle...not a heart. A heart can be broken but a circle goes on forever.


thebeautybrat
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since 2000-03-30
Posts 114
Florida
12 posted 2000-09-07 05:32 PM


very interesting. too bad i don't know the tune to the song so i could sing it!! hehe i liked this a lot!!



When you love someone write their name in a circle...not a heart. A heart can be broken but a circle goes on forever.


Dopey Dope
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13 posted 2000-09-07 05:43 PM


A genius in the making eh? Ooooo Deranger looks like you got fans!!!!!! OOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! OOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Try not to get too excited though, we as poets all have a long way to go. You know that by now bud, no letting these kick butt compliments gettin to yer head. You rock tho, you're kinda like me in the aspect that you're.....well........ MESSED UP! Yea, so keep it real, dont watch too much porno, and stay true to the mind. Adios



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


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