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Deranger
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0 posted 2000-09-03 02:42 AM



Some guys never get it (yeah yeah)

I remember when you and me,
Used to spend the day together,
Everyday together,

But now you call me a prick,
And you swear you’d stick,
You fist in my fist in my face,
If I ever call you again, oh yeah,

I still remember the way you laughed,
When you pushed me down that elevator shaft,
I got this funny feeling,
You don’t love me anymore, no no,

I guess I lost a little self-esteem,
That time that you made it with the whole tennis team,
Oh why don’t you love me anymore?

Your friends would all talk about me,
I used to be superman, now I am superjerk,
Oh, but I still think things could work, out,
Yeah, yeah,

There are so many things I need to tell (you),
But I can’t, cause the cops locked me in this cell,
So I sit and wonder, why oh why, did you change your number?
I get this funny feeling, you don’t love me anymore, no no.

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AngelShell
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since 2000-03-01
Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...
1 posted 2000-09-03 02:55 AM


Hey Babe!

Know what, I actually found myself singing those words...it was so teen boppy it wasn't funny.  
I think it was just the 'oh yeah yeah's that did it.
Lol, I swear to god you should be a muse in a next life (mine please!).
I think I should try some of that light hearted crap that seems to get you so far in life (mmm, no, that wasn't a personal stab - 'yeah right')
So, see ya round cutie.


Beautiful is empty
Beautiful is free
Beautiful loves no one
Beautiful stripped me
~Beautiful~
~Creed~

DragonFang
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2 posted 2000-09-03 03:14 AM


I believe that these are they lyrics from a wierd al song... if they aint, then they ARE VERY simular.
Deranger
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3 posted 2000-09-03 03:29 AM


"I still remember the way you laughed,
When you pushed me down that elevator shaft,
I got this funny feeling,
You don’t love me anymore, no no,

I guess I lost a little self-esteem,
That time that you made it with the whole tennis team,
Oh why don’t you love me anymore?"

Those two lines are heavily influenced by a weird al song, but they are not the same...But a there are only so many words out there.



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DragonFang
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4 posted 2000-09-03 03:36 AM


*nods* actually I just went and grabed my wierd all collection, found the song in question too, and yea, it is different, sorry for the misunderstanding.

"Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

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