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Just A Dream (repost) |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
When you look into their eyes You fill up with wonderful sighs They are in your dreams And everytime you look at them your face just beams Wishing you were in their arms Knowing that they would protect you from any harm When you wanna give them a hug You turn away cause they'll think you're a bug They're in love , but it's not you So how much you love them They don't have a clue If you and him had a chance The relationship would surly dance If the dancing did stop Your heart would slowly drop So if things don't work out You'll know not to sit there and pout Cause it's just a dream You never know what it could mean ~Guys are like stars, there are millions of them, but only one can make you dreams come true~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've expressed the beauty of dreams well Nikkisweet! Always open to interpretation ... very nicely penned!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lone Insomniac Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 45 |
hey it's just amazing how you keep fascinating me with your poems !!! such a great poem again !!! don't know how U keep doing it !! keep up the great work !!! you're amazing !!! see yaa, robin |
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