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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
A friend, so very far away; I want to protect you, yet do not know how. You're so very special to me Yet I know not what I can do For you are so very far away. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
You could title this poem "Very Far Away". Its short and sweet, and right to the point. Good job.  ~Guys are like stars, there are millions of them, but only one can make you dreams come true~ |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
I know what you can do...you want to protect your friend...love them! All you have to do is show this person that you love them, believe me, it doesn't matter how far away the two of you are...Love crosses the widest oceans, Climbs the highest mountains, and walks the most desolate deserts. That's the best I can think of. At any rate,as always, keep writing!!Great Poem. Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm.:)~*~ |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Nikkisweet Actually I toyed around with different titles for a while, but decided it best to leave it w/o one. Anywho, glad you like it, I did too.  StarPryncess17 That should be 18 (if you watch DBZ you'd understand that), anyway, enough with my wierdness . . . in part anyway. Anywho, I try to let my friend know I love her (as a friend) but sometimes she needs someone there for her, cuz she dosn't seem to have any other "real" friends. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
hmz, what more can I say except "I loved it"... love, Virgin Suïcide... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Is this poem about being distant from your friend's problems? If so, you CAN reach them. If you think it's something REALLY serious, try to get them some professional help. Most importantly, let them know that you are always there for them. That can help more than you think. Best of luck!< !signature--> "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea [This message has been edited by LoveBug (edited 09-03-2000).] |
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