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Nikkisweet
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 183
Tx, Dallas

0 posted 2000-09-02 05:29 PM



When I look up at the sky
I sometimes just start to cry
Thinking about friends and family I miss
And then lightly blowing them a kiss

I wonder if they can feel the wind
The touch of that kiss I send
Are they thinking about me
And hopefully watching over me?

Someday I'll be up there
Then I won't have a fear to bare
No more hurt, no more pain
I wouldn't have to live my life in vain

Until then this earth is my place
And this horrible suffering I do have to face
So I send them a goodnight kiss
Letting them know, it's them I miss


~Guys are like stars,
there are millions
of them, but only
one can make you dreams
come true~

© Copyright 2000 Nikkisweet - All Rights Reserved
Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-09-02 08:02 PM


Nikki~~~This is a beautiful poem...I really like it alot...Keep up the good work!!!I believe that anyone who we have lost are watching down on us to make sure we are safe...

p.s.~~~I love your quote!!!


~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~


Lone Insomniac
Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 45

2 posted 2000-09-03 06:19 AM


YAY
this poem was unbelievable !!! damn you really have a gift !!! this is great...really liked this...just ...the length was perfect...not too short or too long..just perfect !!!
aarrghh...you're so much better than me...I'll have to write more to get as good as you are !!!
and btw check your email =)

byezzz
Robin

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
3 posted 2000-09-04 11:23 AM


Oh, this is awesome!  It seemed to flow great and the feeling behind it was just incredible.  Great job on this one, keep it up
Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
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Twilight Zone
4 posted 2000-09-04 12:35 PM


Bling Bling  

seriously, I'm speechless

Keep writing...please


As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

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