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too Prove someone , isn't it that what it's all about ?
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too Prove someone , isn't it that what it's all about ? |
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Lone Insomniac Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 45 |
I wrote this poem for a girl, she didn't want to choose between me and her real boyfriend... I just wanted to Prove myself...I also wrote music to this poem... thanks.. Prove Sincerely I’m yours, all the bloodletting, made me pale Hear me I’m yours, all the tears that ring, made me hail... YOU....prove to be ALL....that I want in me all that I want... I hear your words, you should understand, I won’t fail This is my curse, why I just can’t, wait to stay with YOU....prove to be ALL....that I want in me YOU....prove to see ALL....that I want to be all that I want to be... I fear your eyes, I could drown in them, like this river That flows like ice, I wish it could never end, my skin to shiver ‘cause of YOU....prove to be ALL....that I want in me YOU....prove to see ALL....that I want to be YOU ...!!! you’re All, that I want YOU ...!!! you’re All, but I just can’t does it matter ? ...really matter...at all ? ‘cause YOU....prove to be ALL....that I want in me YOU....prove to see ALL....that I want to be PROVE ME !!! PROVE ME !!! PROVE ME !!! YOU....prove to be ! ALL....that I want in me ! YOU....prove to see ! ALL....that I want to be ! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Dude, this poem was great. I would so love to hear the music to this. What kind of music is this going too? Id like to have a better picture of the type of music. Cuz i liked the poem. keep up the good writing!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Lone Insomniac Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 45 |
uhm..grunge music... kinda like silverchair... my real lyrics for my band are really hard and rap and a lot of the f-word, but I really like to write softer stuff like this =) thanks anywayzz... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
See im a song writer aswell. I really think that the lyrics match the grunge branch of music. See im more of a smashing pumpkins type of writer.......but still in the grunge phase of things. Dude, good luck with the band. Keep rollin I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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