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Don't give up
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Don't give up |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
Don't give up whatever the cost, People surive we endure thanks to the Cross, So many things we let slip by, Yet it is no suprise when we try to use that as our aliby, So many people look down many, But when they rise up what happens??? Why do they pick on people, I will tell you with they hate their own life so they make you hate yours and thus a new cirle of hate is brought before our eyes, The only two certain thing in this life time our love and hate. Two things in which we cannot predict because they our naturel. They just happen no one can really escape, Even with a heart of stone it can one girl to break that, That would have been my first girlfriend Jessica, I still love her but I cannot tell her that because the fun we had together is nothing more than a momeory driving me crazy because I just sit and think about them over and over you get the point. The point that I am getting to is that fact after we broke up and I was living in hell for a long time finally a angel found my courspe and healed me and freed me from the self-tourture I have been endureing for such a long time. The point is I never gave up nor I never stoped loving For when day turn to night I am still there The fallen angel jytree |
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*ChrisLover* Junior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 46erie, colo |
hey great poem yo!! i really like dit!! im glad to see you writting such great stuff!!! keep up the good work and you rigt never give up... i know hwat ya mean man!! love ~janette~ Everything happens for a reason.. sometimes it's bad, but sometime it's good!! just remeber there's people out here who care! |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"The point is I never gave up nor I never stoped loving" A powerful message, my friend, and one we all need to hear. The only way we can be truely defeated is if we give up. Keep your hope up, and keep loving!  (And keep up the good work!)< !signature--> "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea [This message has been edited by LoveBug (edited 09-02-2000).] |
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Lone Insomniac Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 45 |
hey ! that was a great poem...I liked the way it was written with all the long sentences...and it brings a good message too !! keep up the damn good work !!! see yaazzz Robin |
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