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DancinQueen
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0 posted 2000-08-31 11:56 PM



You're so sweet,
yet so cruel.
You're everything I want,
yet everything I hate.
I want you near,
yet I push you away.
I want to love you,
yet I hate you so much.

How can you seem so perfect in everything you say and do,
but I won't allow my heart to feel anything for you?

**This really doesnt make any sense...just some confused thoughts im having about someone

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Erin
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1 posted 2000-09-01 12:15 PM


DQ~~~Girl this makes perfect sense...You are just having confused thoughts...I like it and Im sure other people will too!!!Keep up the good work...

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~


Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2000-09-01 06:43 AM


I agree with Erin, ... it makes perfect sense DancinQueen! It's the same feelings we all have when we're pulled backward and forward trying to find answers that elude us. Nicely penned!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Acies
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3 posted 2000-09-19 12:00 PM


short but a lot of emotions....Erin's right.
best advice is don't follow your heart, cause when it's wrong it really tears apart
i think at least  

As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Virgin Suïcide
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4 posted 2000-09-19 08:15 AM


it does make sense...damn...theres this quote...have to look it up, dunno how it went...ok, when I found it I'll let ya know...

luvz, VS

Experience of survival is the key

To the Gravity of Love
~*~Enigma~*~

Kandi
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5 posted 2000-09-19 03:47 PM


Wow, thanx for posting this. I think it makes sense to a lot of people b/c we all do that...push people away for a reason we can't explain. I know I do! Very well written and great idea! I loved it.
Much Love
Kandi


~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~

~All that I have found in reason is reason just to not believe.~

DancinQueen
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6 posted 2000-09-19 04:40 PM


Wow! LOL BIG BIG BIG thanks to acire for bumping this from like the begining of the month~~>thanks babe!

VS~> Thanks   Yeah let me know what that quote ure talking about is

Kandi~> yeah this was actually posted along time ago...its kinda like i like someone but i know i shouldnt and imtrying to hold back my feelings..i dunno


"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

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