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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina 
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*Hey kids, another of my wondrous songs comin' atcha! And for those of you who care, this is in no way auto-biographical. I'm still single, psycho and umm, oh yeah, alive! Take care.* Who's gonna carry me When I fall asleep? Who will pull me out When I'm in too deep? Where are the lifeguards Now that summer is gone? I'm sorry, dear I thought you were the one So I cry out As I dry out And I listen closely To the voice of a ghostly Angel While he tells me not to worry I'm worried, dear So save me Who's gonna touch me When I'm too far to reach? Who's gonna help me When I'm too hard to teach? Where are the angels Now that heaven is done? I'm sorry, dear I thought you were the one So I cry out As I dry out And I listen closely To the voice of a ghostly Angel While he tells me not to worry I'm worried, dear So save me So I cry out As I die out And you listen closely To the voice of a ghostly Angel While he tells you there's no hurry Don't worry, dear He saved me Somebody stop the world, I want to get off! *me |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Wow! This was awesome. I loved the words. Put music with it and i bet it could be a #1 billboard hit lol  Keep up the gr8 work!!~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Lyric~~~I swear that I replied to one just like this  ...But who knows...I really like it...Keep up the good work...I cant wait to see more!!! ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Wow, this is excellent. Well my question is if you write song, do you sing? jason  Just as soon as I belong, then it's time I disapear... -Metallica- |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
wow....very nice, but i'm wondering too, do u just write songs or do you also sing?? this is a great piece....keep the words coming! Salma |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Actually, yes I do sing. I thought I told ya'll...whoops! I'm lead singer for a local band down here w/ some of my buds called Valet Parking. We do a lot of gigs and stuff, and I sometimes post my lyrics here before we perform them to get some feedback. So if anyone's wondering why I'm always writing songs, well that's why! Love you guys! *~Meredith~* Somebody stop the world, I want to get off! *me |
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