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JoLake137
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since 2000-06-25
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0 posted 2000-08-31 02:41 PM


I look at you,
you're looking at her,
and a tear rolls down my cheek.
But when she's not around,
you're looking at me.
What am I supposed to think?
You understand me like no other,
from the moment we first talked,
we clicked and became part of eachother.
Maybe it was fate,
or simply luck.
But the truth is I'm falling in love with you,
and it scares me.
What if you love your girlfriend to much,
and I'm just wasting my time.
I don't want to loose the bond we share,
and a friendship like ours.
Everytime we talk,
it's hurts beyond belief.
No-one has ever made me feel this way before,
and I pray that someday we will be together.

Until then I love you hun

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Jenn Cirrincione
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1 posted 2000-08-31 02:48 PM


I'm sorry! That completely sux... That 'has a girlfriend already, but I can change that' doesn't usually work, sorry. And I wish you wouldn't pine for him... I wish I could explain to you how horrible it can get watching the guy with his girl, and you're just a side treat. Please try to move on! For your own peace of mind hun. Good writing.
Jenn

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
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2 posted 2000-08-31 03:36 PM


I agree with Jenn how she said its as if you are a side treat...I mean what does this guy think he's pulling???Does he think that you would want him even if he does have a girlfriend???I dont care for guys like that...They act as if they could get ever girl they want even if they already have a girl that they "LOVE"...

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~


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