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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
I am one Who sits alone Talks to no one All is over I am one Whose heart is breaking My joy he's taking Away from my life I am one Whose flower is wilted Whose light is stilted As he walks away I am one Whose chain is broken No words are spoken As he turns away, forever I am one Whose life is over I am one That has nothing "Poetry is what makes the invisible appear"-Author Unknown |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Hey! I really liked this. I've felt what you're feeling before and it sucks a big one. But you're not alone just remember that. KEep your chin up and smile!  ~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
i hate to read these sad poems, but i write them too You are the one who has all of us here Trying to help out and rid off your tears keep your head up As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yes yes well it was a nice poem. BUt oh well......"i am one"....i heard that line off of the smashing pumpkins, they kick ass. Anyway, the poem, very nice...... i liked the concept although its obviously a sad one.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Beautiful. I really like it! Sad, but true. You're amazing! *~Meredith~* Somebody stop the world, I want to get off! *me |
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Misty Blue Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 44 |
I really feel you on this one and I can relate to every word more than once. It's sad but it's true. Thanks,Stay Tru |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
Dear sweet lady here me so true, as I ask a question: why are you so blue. I read your poem with a little fear of something being wrong something big I feel your pain expressed by your words yet I see your face and it almost conferms a fear unspoke of from me to see please let me talk with you I might be out of my walk with God but I can still help your sweet friend jay For when day turn to night I am still there The fallen angel jytree |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
thanks all for your replies. It isn't me that is feeling this way...it's just a poem that came up in my head. I know it confuses people, but it just happens that way  thanks for replying, though! And I'll keep my head up too ~*~SCG~*~ "Poetry is what makes the invisible appear"-Author Unknown |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Thank God this isn't you....I was gonna say! I've done that before two, wrote stuff that didn't apply to me, but just came from somewhere inside. Great job.... Salma |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I'm also glad to hear this piece doesn't apply to your own life. It's very well-written, but it's so sad. Keep up the good work! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
So sad indeed. But hey, it can't rain every day. Jason Just as soon as I belong, then it's time I disapear... -Metallica- |
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buttercup411 Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 41miami, fl, u.s |
omg that poem was so nicely expressed, it was so beautifull... keep it up !@##)*(^&*+)_<><:"~^*&#@ sometimes i stand, sometimes i sit... i never know what there is to know.. i never could write a poem.. : ) |
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