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Acies
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0 posted 2000-08-31 10:19 AM


How I wonder why it had to be this way
Forever in my life, I wanted you to stay
Everyday I wake up, tears in my eyes, still loving you
Hoping and praying that you'd feel the same way for me too

I dream of the things, with you, I could have done
Being together, forever with you, just having fun
You're the first one I ever loved, that I could honestly say
Didn't know what to do then for I really haven't felt that way

I'm still thinking of what I did wrong and why we fell apart
Though I lied to you and made you cry right from the start
I know I made a lot of mistakes that probably made you mad
Believe me, one thing I'd never intentionally do is make you sad

Now all I have is a broken heart filled with loneliness
My life is nothing without you, I'm all torn into pieces
Though it's hard having this feeling of uncertainty
I just can't move on cause it's gonna be really hard for me

Being a fool, waiting forever, that I know I should do
For the only thing that matters to me now is to be with you
Everyday I pray you'd come back in my life, though it's very unlikely
Please try to understand, loving you is all that means to me



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LoveBug
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1 posted 2000-08-31 04:36 PM


My friend, this is a wonderful poem. I'm so sorry for what you're going through. You have the strongest kind of love for this person, it seems. It's the love that outlives the relationship... and perhaps, the love of the other person. But things will all work out, I know. Good luck in the future!

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

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2 posted 2000-08-31 08:08 PM


Friend, this poem was VERY KICK ASS. Know why? cuz i relate. You don't know how much i relate. Lemme just say i am going through this RIGHT NOW...my gf, first gf may i add, dumped me. I was with her for 2yrs buddy.....im a senior in highschool and she took up most of my highschool life. Liking her since i was 12 till now.....And dude, your poem was really great. I appreciated it. I relate to it....and i just want you to know that it's hell. This feeling, your feeling, my feeling......it's hell. I know something though, I'll make it. So, I think that along with your sorrow comes maturity and a experience to learn from. OH well bud, keep up the writing.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

LyricFetish
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3 posted 2000-08-31 11:11 PM


You've done a great job with this! I commend you. Isn't love complicated? Dude.....I get what you're saying here. Peace out!

*~Meredith~*

Somebody stop the world,
I want to get off!
*me

Acies
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4 posted 2000-09-02 05:39 PM


Lovebug --- yes, I do care for this girl a lot, and I'm scared that I would never open up to anyone again.

Dopey Dope ---- If this related to you, try reading the first part, just search on it under my name, it should come up

Lyric Fetish ---  Very complicated cause other people play games.  It shouldn't be this hard though

As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Isabel Galaxia
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5 posted 2000-09-02 06:50 PM


Acire- it's a great poem, and I feel so bad for you!  Love is...I don't know...love is strange.  I can't think of anything to tell you but everything should work out in the end, in one way or another.  Best of luck to you, lemme know how it all goes
Bel


Beautiful is empty
Beautiful is free
Beautiful loves no one
Beautiful stripped me
-"Beautiful" CREED

Acies
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6 posted 2000-09-24 04:06 PM


Isabel -- no, everything is not working out in the end.  Actually, everything is getting worse and worse everyday.  It's been so long since I've been with her, but I still can't get over it.  I know for a fact that I wouldn't.

As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Erin
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7 posted 2000-09-24 04:23 PM


Acire~~~I know how you felt about this girl...At least I think I know how you are feeling...One day things are gonna get better for you...And you are gonna be happy...All this heart ache that we go through is gonna be worth something in the future...Just remember that...I am here for you if you ever wanna talk...You know the email...

*Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit*

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