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IsGona
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since 2000-07-14
Posts 723


0 posted 2000-08-31 08:17 AM


to a girl I just met
I think they call her Jess
she understood me
and for that I'm blessed
I'd like to say hi
and thanks for the chat
but since I'm lost for words
I write in this format
she let me read her poem
and I was honorred
but will I talk to her again?
is what I really pondered



"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN"
~Hatebreed~
"I am, who I am
and what you think,
I don't give a damn"
Chilli Peppers


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Jose Marti
Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374
washing DC
1 posted 2000-08-31 04:08 PM


this is a very nice poem. It's a great way to express your feelings. Good luck with this girl.
LyricFetish
Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
2 posted 2000-08-31 11:36 PM


Very unique! I think this is really, really good. Different, cool.....you're awesome.

*~Meredith~*

Somebody stop the world,
I want to get off!
*me

Lovely_Kris
Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176

3 posted 2000-09-01 11:47 PM


I think this is a great poem and good luck.
Lovely_Kris

Salooma
Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

4 posted 2000-09-02 12:49 PM


good luck with this girl, this simple poem shows great emotion. Thanks for sharing it  

Salma

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