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Just another poem for Justin (Please Read) And I might need advice!
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Just another poem for Justin (Please Read) And I might need advice! |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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You used to always say some things, that made me feel good. And I always tried to say things back, because I knew I should. I knew that no one else, loved me the way you do. And I was pretty sure of myself, when I said that I loved you. But something happened now, and I don't know what's with you. You're not the same you used to be, adn i don't see what I can do. When you talk to me now, you avoid my eyes completly. And you never say the same things, you used to say to me. Last time you called, it was just to say goodbye, but I knew what was coming, amd I started to cry. You said your life was cruddy, and you had to get things straight/ So please not to be mad, and don't cry, but that was kind of late. You said we'd be together, you'd come back in January. And now my heart is torn a bit, and I'm feeling quite wary. I guess I could wait till then, If what you say is true/ I really hope it is, because I'd never lie to you. ANd I miss you more than ever, though I see you every day. I want u to know I love you, and I didn't want you to go away. ---------------------------------------------------- Hey, I'm back and I'm all weird again and I have no idea as to what the fuzzy is going on again. Like usual. I don't know what this poem's about, or where it's from, but it's here. And I love Justin very much. Even though we prob. won't be tpogether untill January. Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I understand some parts of your poem completely... almost as if I've spoken them myself... I sort of had a justin... well a joey. Some of the things you spoke of pertain to me and him. Good luck with your boy. Jenn |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Jenn: thanks for replying. What was your Joey like? With Justin it's just really weird b/ he says things like he'd have no prob marrying me when I got older, and then he jsut needed space. Well, I g2g. Bye all. Allysa Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Allysa~~~The way you described the guy in the first couple poems was really good...You gave a good impression of him...And what we should think of him...But the more I read now its like I know that you love him...But why are you gonna sit around and wait for January???Life is to short to sit around and wait for him...I honestly think that you should find someone else...By the way why would you have to wait till January??? ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Enter the gender defender! Ok, I’m here to defend the male side of the human sexual spectrum! This is why Justin says things like “he'd have no prob marrying me when I got older, and then he jsut needed space.” He has a split personality! Wait, maybe that’s not it…uh, um. Perhaps he has problems…uh, in the head, you know? Marriage? Whoa, that’s a sure sign! He’s a nutcase, yep, the “Eight heads in a suitcase” type for sure! Ok, well I tried (in vain) to explain this guy, sorry. Good poem though, maybe you should give it to him…yeah and attach a note asking what the heck is up…uh, you know what….i think I’ll stop giving advice for a few…years. ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time “Writing about darkness comes easily for me. I just close my eyes and write what I |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
ERIN: I have to wait because I've said mostly what I had to say and he just has b-ball, school, work, babysitting, and much more and felt bad bout not calling me everyday. Deranger: Thanks for trying to explain guys to me. You cracked me up! You should reply with your sense of humor, because I need to smile more. Everyone does. Wel thanks for replying and junk, and for making me laugh, and junk and for being you, and junk. bye now. Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
So what are you supposed to do???Put your life on hold for this guy???Please tell me that!!! |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
nice poem [This message has been edited by Dopey_Dope (edited 09-01-2000).] |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Allysa, I have been there. It's hard, but it really is worth the wait. Guys can be confusing sometimes--I know! But things work out in the end. My suggestion for you would be to live your own life, but don't forget about Justin, and then when January rolls around, you can pick up where you left off. Good luck to you, and I hope I've helped. Elizabeth P.S. I enjoyed your poem, too!  |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Allysa - You know what I think? Take a break from Justin for a while, just ease away. Occupy yourself with other things, just not with him. It'll help you both realize what your solution is Salma |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
hehe.....funny.... had sorta the same situation too one time.... if you wanna swap those stories, u can mail me, ok? love, Virgin Suïcide... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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