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X_me_X
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since 2000-08-18
Posts 37


0 posted 2000-08-31 03:08 AM


i love him more that i can say
i love him a lot, in a different way
a way that is so new to me
the way i love him has set my heart free

this love goes way beyond stares
this love feels great cus i know how much he cares

he cares about me that same way
and my trust i know hed never betray
he shows he loves me every day
and to the dear lord i do pray
to let the melody of love play
and as i listen wit my heart
i clearly see that our love wus real from the start

i know he loves me
that, i do not care to wonder
but i do wonder if he wonders as i do
how far this love will go, thru and thru
i wonder if he wonders about us too

what will happen if he never asks and i never say
how much i want his sweet love to stay
how much i want in my life his loving arms
how much i want in my heart his love and warmth
what will become of us if we never do say
to eachother we feel the same way

what will happen to all this love we feel we feel
will it be here in our hearts and prove to be real
or will it leave our hearts, this crazy passion
will we realize it wusnt love, but pure obsession
will we see that its too late to give it a try
or will we jus love silently and let the fire die

i duno what will be of me and him
but i sure do wonder now and again
what will become of us if he never asks and i never say
that i love him and he feels the same way


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Misty Blue
Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 44

1 posted 2000-08-31 11:16 PM


Hey,I'm your first reply! Anyways, nice poem a bit long but thay makes it better.I like being able to relate to poems. Keep it up and check out Misty blue sometime. Stay Tru
Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-09-01 12:36 PM


This is a really good one...Well I wish you the best of luck with this guy...But why keep wondering???Why dont you try and find out what it is you keep wondering about???But anyways keep up the good work...

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~


X_me_X
Junior Member
since 2000-08-18
Posts 37

3 posted 2000-09-01 01:45 AM


well it's just that this guy is like my best friend and i dont want to screw things up between us. plus he is shy about this and so am i; so i cant say anything and neither can he!!
it's really messed up.

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