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Deranger
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since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
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0 posted 2000-08-30 06:26 PM


All-Star Crack Heads

Caution: the following contains adult subject matter!
If you’re a child, turn away, unless you really want to stay,
Go ahead and ask questions, but no talking during the show!
You can be who you want, but you must follow our lead!

If you’re deaf, you must listen to this,
If you’re mute, please repeat after me,
If you’re blind, please write what you see,

What does the subject matter?
The sauce is sure to splatter!
And our friends are sure to scatter!
Our dreams surely to shatter,

If you’re sober, then walk the line,
If you’re drunk, then have a good time!

Honesty’s a virtue that can hurt you,
You want the truth?  What version please?
If you don’t stop behaving yourself,
I’m going to have to ask you to leave!

Had enough? Then fall to your knees,
They’ll want their money back,
If your still alive so how do you plead?

If you’re guilty, then you are free to leave,
If you’re innocent, then prepare to bleed!

In America, you’re free,
But you can’t do that, it’s illegal
And you can’t say that, it’s a secret,
Don’t you understand by now?
Just close your eyes and you’ll see!

The truth in all these lies!



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StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
1 posted 2000-08-30 07:14 PM


Wow! Very impressive D! I have never read something so blunt and to the point! an excellent post with even better points! You are sooooo right! Keep it up! I love your work!   Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

~*~Why is it that love always
starts with a HuG
grows with a kIsS
and ends with a TeAr?!?~*~

Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-08-30 07:17 PM


Deranger~~~Where in the world did you come up with this???I must say you are not crazy but more along the lines of being a psycho...LOL This was really good...I was alot different then the poems that are usually posted...Keep up the good work!!!

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~


Jacman
Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291
Dwight Il, US
3 posted 2000-08-30 09:02 PM


Very cool, I like this alot.  I love it when people put things like this togethor.  You showed an excellent display of brain matter.  Keep up the good work.

jason

Just as soon as I belong, then it's time I disapear...
-Metallica-

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