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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
I went everywhere, I went nowhere I never left my chair. I went somewhere, I went elsewhere Mountians high and valleys low. I went up, I went down To the peaks of the word. I looked here, I looked there But my friends were not here. I looked toward the Lord I found all of my friends there. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice From what I've tasted of desi |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Wow this is good...I like the last line the best...So I guess it is true to save the best for last...LOL Keep up the good work!!! ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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MoonPrincess Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 29Wisconsin, USA |
Hey, Sammers, this was a very good poem, something i love... keep up the good work.. love you tons, MoonPrincess "Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear." |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
awwww, thanks both of ya =) "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice From what I've tasted of desi |
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