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What's Tha Deal?
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What's Tha Deal? |
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Pimpin Poet New Member
since 2000-08-28
Posts 5 |
WHAT'S THA DEAL What's tha deal Just tell me the truth Do you even like me Cause there's no proof You barely call me Maybe once a day But look here baby We ain't gon make it that way Somebody told me You didn't even like me And all I could say was I know what I see It was so easy to tell By the way you acted Because with everything you did I was subtracted We went to the movies You acted like you didn't wanna be there Well know this baby I did and I care So the next time You try to break somebody's heart Remember You always have to finish what you start So now that you know How I feel Just let me know What's tha damn deal |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Wow that was really good! Very nice flow to it, and nice first post. What can I say..hmmm....people can be cruel sometimes, really cruel, I know this. If this is about you(there's always a chance it's not), which I'm guessing it is, this person isn't worth your time if they act like that. Good luck! Well keep writing and keep your chin up, great poem Bel |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Wow that was really good! Very nice flow to it, and nice first post. What can I say..hmmm....people can be cruel sometimes, really cruel, I know this. If this is about you(there's always a chance it's not), which I'm guessing it is, this person isn't worth your time if they act like that. Good luck! Well keep writing and keep your chin up, great poem Bel |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Hi! Welcome to Passions! I'm sorry that things didn't work out for you in this relationship, but something better will come along. You just have to keep your eyes open. Good luck! PS-check your e-mail! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Great first poem I really enjoyed it keep up the great work. Lauren |
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