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Jenn Cirrincione
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0 posted 2000-08-29 04:17 PM


Give it up it's over...
Our friendship is no more,
I told you everything,
Everything I learned, earned, explored.

I can't believe after all of this,
you're even emptier still.
Kiss this goodbye, it's obviously diminishing already.
I want you to remove yourself, you no longer give to me whole-heartedly.

Every time I told you, everthing I knew...
I confessed to you my heart and soul,
You took what I gave, and held it against me, your friend.
I hate that you hurt me.

Don't you think I've always known, we were completely different?
I, mature, and open to your thoughts,
you a selfish shrew.
I never claimed perfection, but I thought you always knew,
I tried to be the friend you deserved, but you cared only for you.


[This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 08-29-2000).]

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Erin
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1 posted 2000-08-29 04:50 PM


Jenn~~~What can I say...I think we all have had a friend like that before...I know that I have...and you know what I am no longer friends with her...Things happened...I grew up realizing I didnt need a friend like that...Good work on the poem!!!

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~


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