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Broken_Heart
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since 2000-07-24
Posts 57
Netherlands

0 posted 2000-08-29 07:18 AM


A Poem of Love

Love so tender
With your sweet touch
A caress of our lips
To seal our love

I drift away
Thinking of you
Each day and night
We are apart

You are there
In my mind and heart
As I miss our tender kiss
Each time you are away

I love you, Loes
Each day a bit more
I never want to lose you
You are the one I love

- Dedicated to Loes -


Darkness upholds Light as much as Holiness downs the Evil within...


© Copyright 2000 Jean Phillippe Wijnholds - All Rights Reserved
Salooma
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since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

1 posted 2000-08-29 10:47 AM


this is such a sweet post....i was wonder what loes was when i saw the title, i thought it was a word i must not know....but when i realized it was a name, i felt a bit stupid and thought i'd share....but your post is wonderful! Very nicely write.

Salma

Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-08-29 01:48 PM


Broken_Heart~~~This is such a sweet poem!!!It is really good too!!!I was wondering about the title too...Dont laugh its just I cant remember if anyone has ever put the title of a poem in someones name...I cant wait to see more of your work!!!

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~


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