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Jenn Cirrincione
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0 posted 2000-08-29 06:52 AM


Two guys I see, right in front of me...
One the meaker, less attractive,
The other taken, and oh so far out of reach.
One prepeared to start with fresh eyes,
The other swears to never forget.

One, I've already seen, what his heart can do to me,
The other friendly, shy, and a little out of place,
Which guy is right for me?
Most likely neither...
I need to move on just let them be.

I wish I had psychic eyes, and a matching heart,
I wish I could just move on, when one of them is is toying with mine.
I feel so stupid, is either one who I need?
Most likely I'm just wishing for the impossible feat... of love.
And I just can't move on.


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1 posted 2000-08-29 01:42 PM


"I feel so stupid, is either one who I need"
I like that part...But the only way you will find out is if you let your heart take over...Let it help you out and you will find out if one of them is who or what you need!!!


~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~


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2 posted 2001-05-15 10:10 PM


Oh Jenn this is a good one.  You really did a great job expressing yourself through this one
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3 posted 2001-12-10 11:12 AM


Moving on is always hard, Jenn. *hugs*
Unforunately, it's the memories we have to deal with.

Thanks for sharing the piece. I'm glad I was skipping through the archives and found it.

~AF~

"When I eat I feel. It is better if I don't feel, I am too afraid." - Ellen West

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4 posted 2001-12-10 12:38 PM


that shy friendly guy sounds like the one I'd pick  
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5 posted 2001-12-10 12:40 PM


He turned out to be a big old crybaby. lol
But he's my friend now.  
Thanks for the replies guys.

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

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ROFL
at least you got a friend out of it  

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