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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
What took you so long to notice me you knew time was passing by What took you so long to talk to me you knew that it was our time to part As we leave now to make or break our future lives You tell me that you loved me and that you'd love me for all time I keep asking myself what took her so long to tell me she cared And her reply was that she was scared I asked her of what she was scared of to keep us apart and to let a love die slow in our hearts I asked her was it her friends I asked her was it the judgment of her friends I asked her was it them who kept us apart Then I asked her why she let her love leave her heart Then I told her foolish girl you gave up on true love. [This message has been edited by TrueLUV (edited 08-29-2000).] |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Tru~~~you know i am sorry to hear this...but some girls are just to blind to see what they have until they lose it (same as the guys though)...sounds like to me that you didnt say anything till the end...so its your loss to just as much as it is hers...keep up the good work!!! ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I'd really have to agree...you didn't say anything either, did you? I can't allow the female to be blamed completely, here. I'm sorry it didn't work out, maybe it wasn't meant to be right now? Jenn |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
I liked this, we women are too many times foolish when it comes to love. So I can agree with this....I like the style you give it....it's different. Keep writing.... Salma |
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