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Wisdom
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since 2000-06-25
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0 posted 2000-08-29 01:55 AM


Looking back at the past
I just fall out and laugh at some of the things I've done,
I haven't done it all but still had a ball and also having the one.
The times of my life felt just right just whenever she was around,
When push came to shove she showed me much love and proved how she was down.
But when it all came to pass I just fall out and laugh and scream "God that was fun",
But deep in my heart it rips me apart to lose that special someone.

         Grandma R.I.P -Te Amo. Wisdom

© Copyright 2000 Wisdom - All Rights Reserved
Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
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1 posted 2000-08-29 02:24 AM


Wisdom~~~This is a very sweet poem...I like it alot...You know that your grandma is watching down on you...Making sure you are being good...I love the last line...I cant remember the last time a family member died that i was close to...But I had a really close friend of mine get killed...And just like you said "deep in my heart it rips me apart"...Its still tearing at my heart and its been almost 2 years...Keep up the good work...

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~


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