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qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2000-08-28 07:38 AM


YOU MIGHT BE THE ONE

I love the way you laugh,
with your whole heart.
The look on your face,
when you think of something,
that noone else could understand.
I love how you love the little things.
Fascinated with the clear blue sky.
You count the glorious colors of dusk,
& hum the rhythm of the rain.
You see beauty from the inside out.
The pieces of nothing,
that others can't see.
You are a magical mystery.
So enthusiastic & wrapped up,
in the things I fail to notice.
I long to see out of your eyes,
& know what's going on in you head.
I couldn't help thinking this morning,
when I saw you smiling,
your bright eyes shining.
You might just be the one.
I just hope you are the one!

"Coming together is a beginning, keeping together is progress, working together is success."

~My wish isn't to mean everything to everyone, but to mean something to someone.~

LOVE ELMO


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Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
1 posted 2000-08-28 11:18 AM


Oh, this is great   It flowed well and sounds great, and hey, maybe they are the one   Keep writing great poems!!
Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-08-28 01:20 PM


qtpie~~~this is so sweet...sounds like this one is the "one"...keep up the good work...by the way i like your quote about the wish...

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~


qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
3 posted 2000-08-28 04:33 PM


Thanx guys I wrote this 1 when my boyfriend & I 1st got together on may 28th 1999. We've been together for 1 year & 3 months today & I still think he's the one!   LOVE ELMO I'm legal in Canada now yay   (I turned 19 on 8-23-00!!)
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