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Zombie Man Member
since 1999-06-22
Posts 52Va |
Its one of those days. That I feel like breaking out of here away from people. Tired of hearing all those explicit words from your mouths. I'm just wanting to have that happiness that I see. But now I realize that it's never meant for me. Why don't you just die?? That's what I see in your eyes. I will not die. I have a life to live. Go away. And let me be free. I'm a person not a toy. you can't throw me all around. I say here to stand my ground. One day I shall stop you all from holding me down. I'm a man not a bellboy. Why don't you just die?? That's what I see in your eyes. I will not die. I have a life to live. Go away. And let me be free. Please God save me. Make them all go away. Watch my pain and take it from me. Show these demons I can be set free. Why don't you just die?? That's what I see in your eyes. I will not die. I have a life to live. Go away. And let me be free. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like this, it's very creative. It sounds like a song. Great job, keep it up! |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
Oh, how we all long to be free. I really like this poem, it expresses the need to brake free so well. Keep it up! Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets tr |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
i have to agree with lakewalker this sounds like a song...but it is still good...keep up the good work!!!  ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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