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Jenn Cirrincione
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0 posted 2000-08-27 08:02 PM


It's over, I sigh, stress finally relieved.
I feel so utterly hopeful for my future.
I breathe more easily now, a smile on my face.
I've gotten my second chance to live.

But I turn around, and there you are,
I smell you at every corner...
I told you I would.
I told you I'd never forget.

These mixed emotions are far from appealing,
It'd be easier to hate, to be disgusted by you.
But, that seems so difficult, and maybe I want it not.
You provide something for me, I know not yet what.

I'll somehow always be part of you,
and you a part of me, that's just how it is.
I'll always be the one you hold onto, in the end.
You'll always be in my memory.


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1 posted 2000-08-27 08:15 PM


wow, i loved this one man. its like that one person everyone meets in there life that they can neva 4get or hate...even after things dun go as planned...Great Job!

~All is forgiven but NEVER forgotten~

Lakewalker
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2 posted 2000-08-27 08:27 PM


I like this one, I could really feel it.  Great job!
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