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no way out |
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buttercup411 Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 41miami, fl, u.s |
to whom shall i turn when my world has gone off.. when i look at my life ... & see i've had none... when my days seem to be driven by others on my struggle to make everyone happy forgetting me as a whole.... but still, selfish i'm called..... even if the only reason i'm here is to help these b*tc**s out.. is it all my fault? i just can't do anything right.. at least that's what they tell me i have no saying in this world.. everything is just wrong... but to whom shall i turn to now that my world has gne off? __%#@%$%^%&^%7 one of the reasons i love writting .... makes me take anger down and just write it..... !@##)*(^&*+)_<><:"~^*&#@ sometimes i stand, sometimes i sit... i never know what there is to know.. i never could write a poem.. : ) |
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X_me_X Junior Member
since 2000-08-18
Posts 37 |
hey i liked your poem very well put! i know that there are a lotta ppl who feel taht way about there life as i did at one point in time. u managed to put it in words very well. keep up the good work. ~All is forgiven but NEVER forgotten~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I could feel the anger you put into this one, it's well done. |
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