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Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~

0 posted 2000-08-27 03:27 PM





~*~The Four Letter Word~*~


There is a word that comes to mind,
when I am thinking of you.
It is something very special,
something that is so true.

It tells me how you think,
and proves to me you care.
It is something so precious,
a word only you are to hear.

What can you call it,
but something sweet you feel.
If a heart is broken,
this is something that will help it heal.

You give it some time,
to let it be open and explore.
Hoping that it will turn,
into something that grows more & more.

It will often cause pain,
just like a heart break.
Turing your life,
into another painful ache.

And if you give this to me,
it will never grow old.
For something like this from you,
is just the thing I will behold.


~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~


© Copyright 2000 Erin Erbs - All Rights Reserved
StarPryncess17
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since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
1 posted 2000-08-27 04:49 PM


WOW! I am the first to reply...aren't I special!?!? hehe. Hey girl, as always nicely done work! You are sooo talented! But love is more than a four letter word. Oh my goodness, it is soo much more! anyways...I know how you feel! Keep it up! Love Always~*~Jess Girl~*~

~*~Why is it that love always
starts with a HuG
grows with a kIsS
and ends with a TeAr?!?~*~

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
2 posted 2000-08-27 05:27 PM


This is a great poem, I think it's one of my favorites that you've written (even though I haven't been around long).  Keep up the awesome writting Erin  



[This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 08-27-2000).]

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
3 posted 2000-08-27 08:25 PM


jessica~~~i know love is more then a four letter word...but i couldnt think of a title...so thats why i called it that...you know what...you always have the nicest things to say!!!

lakewalker~~~im really glad you liked it...check out my work if you want...

thanks yous both for the replies...


~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~


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