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At The Expense of My Heart
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At The Expense of My Heart |
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X_me_X Junior Member
since 2000-08-18
Posts 37 |
I loved him so much... but he did not feel me burning up with desire everytime i heard his soothing voice. I loved him so much... but he did not hear my heart sing evey time he glanced my way. i loved him so much... but he did not see the passion in my eyes every time his sweet smile brightened up my day. He wus blind and could not see all the things he meant to me he did not know of that crazy deal the one that my heart had made with him it made my heart bleed and impossible to heal My heart traded all the love it could give for all the hurt it could bear. My soul danced with my heart to the music of fear. He never did realize all the love i felt for him but now its too late.i have moved on and let the leader of my journey be fate. I learned the most precious lesson at the expense of my heart. I learnt that loving someone secretly tears your whole being apart. |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
hmmmm.... very nice. *whipes away a tear* yea, I learnd that the hard way too, at least you know nothing is going to ever happen when they say "I just want to be friends". Oh well, Time heals all wounds, great and small (especialy for a poet). "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice From what I've tasted of desire, I hold with those who favor fire. But if it had to perish twice, I think I know enough of hate To say that for destruction ice Is also great, And would suffice. -Robert Frost |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 Welcome to Passions This was so full of emotion, it's a great poem. I can't wait to read more of your poems! [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 08-27-2000).] |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Welcome to Passions!This was a great poem and I hope to read more of your work.Keep up the awsome work! Lauren |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"I learned the most precious lesson at the expense of my heart. I learnt that loving someone secretly tears your whole being apart." So true, my friend. I know how you're feeling, but tomarrow brings another oppuntunity to sieze the day. PS-Welcome to Passions! Check your e-mail for a special message. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
welcome to passions!!!i hope that you like it here as much as i do...good poem...i cant wait to read more... ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
Welcome and I really enjoyed your poems and I hope you like it here. I hope to read more. Lovely_Kris |
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