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0 posted 2000-08-26 10:03 PM



This will be the year they cry...
A senior now, how the months flew by.
I want to live, and learn, and try...
Let's go out and have the fun we've earned.

This time I'll have a date for the dance,
I'll attract a love with such romance,
I think this is the year, my second chance.
I know in the end this time it'll be my turn.

They gather around the school,
and know it not which one to choose,
just who can win and who must lose.
One lucky guy for each of them, to be with them for the night.

But I look at these girls and sigh,
in the end it's hard to lie,
when your life is flying by.
Realize this, will it matter? Just who it was you took with you on that flight?

In the end you may turn and frown...
Why you turned it all upside down,
picking your date for that night on the town.
Most important in the end, is who it was, that was your friend.

© Copyright 2000 Jennifer Parker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-08-27 12:16 PM


"Most important in the end, is who it was, that was your friend." --very true words here, Jenn.  Well done, I enjoyed this!  Keep up the great work.  

*Krista Knutson*

"You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back."
-Barbara DeAngelis

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2 posted 2000-08-27 10:24 AM


Thank you, recently I've just been noticing the utter triviality around me and I figured that things should be put into their perspective.
Thanks again!- Jenn

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3 posted 2000-08-27 01:48 PM


Your poem make a lot of sence to me so I really loved it.Keep up the awsome work!
  Lauren

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