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Acies
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0 posted 2000-08-25 06:43 PM


Why am I given this life if I only have to go thru all these pain?
Seeing everything I hope for and dream of slowly fade away
Overflowing distress? Total confusion? Faith to denounce?
Why must Life make me hurt, bleed, and suffer everyday?

A disease slowly eating thru everything that I have lived for
To supposedly be kept and can never be returned till taken?
So unfair and merciless that just like that, insanity fills my mind
Why must I be grateful for a chance to be in a world uncertain?

I bleed for all who suffers, I don't want anyone to feel the same
This is unjust. Peace of mind is gone and no where to be found
Where is the help I have been taught to ask and pray for?
What is life's real meaning, if in shackles I am forever bound?

I am tired of crying, hurting, and just plain tired of everything
I have no where to hide, no one to turn to for I am full of doubt
When do I heal? Time's worth is no essence to me anymore
Just want to know the truth and finally realize what I'm living for



[This message has been edited by acire (edited 08-26-2000).]

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StarPryncess17
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1 posted 2000-08-25 06:51 PM


If only I had answers to your many questions enlisted. I would love to say well this is how it is and why it is and you be happy with it...unfortunately, I too live in the world as you--unsure and confuesd and lost--it reminds me of a saying I once heard "We all live as we dream-Alone" Just makes me think. Don't let other people get you down! Life is too precious for that!You are a much better person than that, and even though your life may seem to suck just remember that it isn't as bad when you look back, and no one is worth the pain you must endure to succeed in getting over your love. Keep your head up Acire! I'm here for you...

~*~Why is it that love always
starts with a HuG
grows with a kIsS
and ends with a TeAr?!?~*~

LoveAll
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2 posted 2000-08-25 10:47 PM


What intense writing!  I really can feel your pain.  But you should know that you are here for a purpose!  God put you here for a reason!  You are not just another "nobody" (not that u are, just in case u ever think that) you are someone to play an IMPORTANT part in God's huge plan.  You are like an instrument in God's band, if you are missing it just doesn't sound right.  Jesus loves you and will ALWAYS, ALWAYS, ALWAYS be there for you!  He will listen when u need someone to talk to, lend a hand when u are down, and answer you when u have questions.  Jesus loves you!  You seem like a great person, and definitly a great writing!  Keep smiling because every day brings new joy!  
God Bless

Those who hope in the Lord will renew their strength. They will soar on wings like eagles; run and not grow weary, walk and not be faint. Isaiah 40:3

Angel
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3 posted 2000-08-25 11:34 PM


I loved it so much. It really is intense. Great job.

~Susie


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~Cinderella


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4 posted 2000-08-26 01:40 AM


" am tired of crying, hurting, and just plain tired of everything
I have no where to hide, no one to turn to for I am full of doubt
When do I heal? Time's worth is no essence to me anymore
Just want to know the truth and finally realize what I'm living for" --Ah, I can relate to that so much...it's hard to not know what it's all about, what you're here for...very powerful, thought provoking verse here, I really enjoyed it.  


*Krista Knutson*

"You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back."
-Barbara DeAngelis

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5 posted 2000-08-26 11:42 AM


This poem really has me thinking.  You did a great job of writing it.  If you really seek the answers from God, you will find them.

"Where is the help I have been taught to ask and pray for?
What is life's real meaning, if in shackles I am forever bound?"

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6 posted 2000-08-27 03:28 AM


God is good, but will he listen?  He may be the purest thing ever, but a good listener he is not.   Suicide is not the answer, let me tell you that right now.   Being dead is worse than living, you know that painful emptiness?  Imagine it multiplied a trillion fold, that’s what it’s like to be dead.   Personally, I find insanity to be the best of friends during crisis.  As for the truth, well, the truth as you  eventually learn, is an illusion.



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Acies
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7 posted 2000-08-28 10:07 AM


First of all, I want everyone to know that all the poems I've written and shared here on Passions have been for this one person, Erica.  I just want everyone to know more about the situations surrounding me.  All my prayers were not selfish for it wasn't for my own benefit.  I prayed for her everyday eventhough we were apart already.  I wanted her to mature up cause of the things I knew she wanted that was very stupid and childish.  Like she wanted to have a child which I personally told her was out of the question.  Well, we ended up apart and she keeps popping in and out of my life which made it really hard to get over he, even now. Every couple of weeks she'd call and make me think that she wanted to come back.  She knows she has me on a leash for she knows I never wanted to get serious with  all the other girls before her, but with her I did and that she;s the only one I've ever said "I Love You" to.  Well recently, she decides to call after almost 7 weeks and tells me she's pregnant.  And that the kid she is carrying is from the guy I hate the most, the guy that stabbed me in the back.  Now, that was a direct hit!!!  Everything is going wrong....

I hope this explains the situation better

As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

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8 posted 2000-08-28 01:52 PM


Acire, I absolutely feel your pain, but I don't think I can ever truely understand what you are going through. I know how many times I wanted to give up, cause for one time in my life I told the truth about how I was feeling, and everything crumbled! This is so hard to understand, but I believe that everything in this life happens for a reason, even if we can't see any reasons for it to happen.

I wish you the best of luck.
God bless!

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9 posted 2000-08-28 03:45 PM


Well, you don't have it easy, do you? I love the poem ~It describes how I feel right now~.And you're even worse off than I am. I am sorry about Erica and all that stuff that's going on in your life. I'm here if you ever want to talk, and I hope you could return the favor. My situation is a little less intense, and nobody seems to care because of my age, which we will not discuss. All of three days ago, I had the most wonderful, awesome, caring, sweet, charming, loveable person in the entire world! No one believes me when I say I love him because they call it "teen love" and all that crud. I come out most in my writing, and the way we got together is because of a poem I wrote to him. After we eventually got together, I was thrilled because he was so much sweeter and nicer and all that than the other guys I have dated, and the ones I haven't. Well, we  "broke up" because of school, his basketball commitments, his job, his babysitting, and he felt lousy about not getting to talk to me and see me everyday. The thing is, we should get back together sometime in the not so near future, because he said he would have no problem marrying me, and I'm not even considering marriage yet. I would have no regrets if I married him though. And I am going to stop and not get into all my problems, because there are to many. Best of luck to you, and if she doesn't appreciate anything you do, well, I am truly sorry. If you want to talk, reply to one of my next poems and I'd be glad to talk.

Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see.

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10 posted 2000-08-30 10:36 AM


Allysa --- thanks for the offer and I would.  I do have someone I do talk to about my situation already though.  But if you wanna talk about yours, I'd be very glad to help.  Just e-mail me  

As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

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11 posted 2000-08-30 12:41 PM


Acire~~~First of all let me tell you that this is a really good poem...And I cant wait till you post more of your work...  

Now what I really want to talk about...This girl called you and told you that she was pregnant by someone you dont get along with??? Why did she do that to you (call you to tell you that)???I mean seriously what does she want you to do...Its not your fault that some other guy got her pregnant...How long have the 2 of yous been apart???Sorry for all the questions...But I find it really weird how your ex would call you...Does she like expect you to come back in her life after she got pregnant by some other guy...
~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~



[This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 08-30-2000).]

Acies
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12 posted 2000-09-02 05:47 PM


ERIN --- Yes, she called me to tell me that she's pregnant.  I know that ignorant, but I didnt mind the call cause I've been missing the sound of her voice really bad.  That kindda leveld things out.  She was telling me how irresponsible the guy is and how much she hated him.  She said that he'd rather buy weed than take care of some of the things she needs cause she's pregnant.  Well, I told her that I'm very disappointed in her and then i asked her if now she's happy cause all this time, she wanted a baby.  I wasn't up for it though.  She said no she's not happy cause she realizes that she's too young to have one.  Well, the last thing for me to do is throw it back to her face.  She doesn't need that, specially from me.  In the end she said that she knows that I feel that I still wanna be with her.  I told her that she was wrong.  I told her that I'd be lying to her if i said that i didn't love her cause i do love her with all my heart.  But i realize that i couldn't be with her.  actually i changed it and said i don't want to be with her specially now that she carries the kid of the guy i hate the most.

As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

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13 posted 2000-10-24 04:57 PM


hey hey   Oh babe my heart goes out to you everytime i read one of your poems. you have so much pain still in your heart. if i could take it all away i would, and im so sorry you feel this way. there's nothing else to do besides cope and try your best to move on. you know im here!

<3 always~~ Kiley


"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

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14 posted 2000-10-24 06:20 PM


Wow, pretty intense stuff acire. NOthing i could help you with but damn.....that problem with the girl, the hated guy, and the baby........geeeeeeeeeeewizzzzzzz.
Good luck dude!



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

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15 posted 2000-10-24 06:30 PM


Wow that was deep. I loved it tho. I know how it feels to not know what you're living for, not find a reason to wake up in the morning. I hope things improve very soon. best of luck. I will be praying for you.
Well great poem, I really liked it. Keep writing, I look forward to reading more soon.

Much love,
  Priscilla


~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~



Acies
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16 posted 2000-10-25 07:44 PM


Thanks for your words on encouragement people.  As you can see, the poem is a little while back, so I'm really doing better now.  Still miss her though

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


Erin
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17 posted 2000-10-26 01:42 AM


Acire~
You know that you are a really good friend to me and all...But please stop living in the past...Its not worth it...Life is way to short to not let go of someone...I know its hard...But you need to find someone to heal all that pain that you are having...

And to me it sounds like you are afraid to let someone love you because Erica is all you could think about...I know that you loved her but if she really loved you she wouldnt have done that...

I know I would never do that to my boyfriend...

You know that you can talk to me whenever...Or email me if im not on...Im still around but Im a somewhat busy girl right now...


~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

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18 posted 2000-10-26 08:07 PM


Being the slack person I am, I missed this the first, and second time.  So yeah, NOW I'll reply.  I haven't read all the replies to this, so I don't know the whole story.  But I can say that this is a great poem, and without all the information, with just the poem itself, it seems lots of people could relate, to a point.  Well....I guess I can just say now that if ya need to talk, I talk more than I post  .  Good luck, hasta luego

Bel

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