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Learning Love |
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ShUgArHiGh Junior Member
since 2000-08-24
Posts 24 |
Learning Love The first time i saw you, I swore i'd never look away. The first time you kissed me. I knew i fell in love that day. The first time that you held me close. My heart just skipped a beat. The first time that you broke my heart, I couldnt fight the tears. The emptiness, The heartbreak, The emotions and the fears. The first time you came back to me, I took you back so fast. I knew that you were sorry, And you wanted us to last. The second time you broke my heart, I had to wonder why. But you said you were sorry, So i let that too, Passby. The third time that you broke my heart, I tried to understand. That you've made a few mistakes, And loved me once again. The last time that you broke my heart, I said, To you, My last goodbye... |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
that is the worst thing about being in love...getting your heart broken...keep your head up and stay strong...and keep up the good work!!! ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
like they say"'Tis better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all" I know it hurts, but with time the pain will subside! I know this situation way better than I would like to. Just keep your head up it will all work out. Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~Why is it that love always starts with a HuG grows with a kIsS and ends with a TeAr?!?~*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Great poem, and I wish you the best of luck if you're going through this. Keep up the great writing  |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
This is an absoulutly beautiful piece! I loved this....just the style of it and the unique rhyme. But I wish you luck. Love is hard, you just gotta get over it sometime. Good luck... Salma |
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