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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2000-08-25 08:29 AM



Wheither you know it our not,
you're important to me.
Weither you like it or not,
you're the only one I see.
Weither you like it or not,
you're always on my mind.
Weither you like it or not,
I won't leave you behind.
Weither you like it or not,
the truth is in you.
Weither you like it or not,
their's nothinfg I can do.
Weither you like it or not,
I will show you I care.
Name the place, say and time,
and I will be there.
Weither you know it or not,
you are my angel,
and I need you right now.

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Hey all! What's up? Guess what? I'm confused again. Alright, here it goes. Try to help, if you can catch this all. I called my boyfriend, Justin, four or five days ago and he was really sweet and then he was like mumbling a lot and I was like what? And it sounded like he was breaking up with me and I got scared and when I get scared I cry. And he was like what's wrong? And then he was like, I'm so stupid. I'm not breaking up with you. So yesterday,I called him and we were sort of talking and he got another call, and he said he'd call me back. SO I waited for forever, freezing because whenever I get nervous, I freeze, and he never called. What should I do? Tomorow is his party and he wants me to come and I don't know if I should wait untill the party to talk to him or if I should call him or what. HELP!!
Allysa


Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see.

© Copyright 2000 Allysa - All Rights Reserved
Erin
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since 2000-06-15
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1 posted 2000-08-25 11:22 AM


allysa~~~this is a good poem...on the help part i think you should talk to him before you go to the party...you should have asked him who called amd why he couldnt talk to you...thats what i would do...and next time he keeps you on hold for awhile i would hang up on him and see what he says to that...i hate being put on hold...and if my boyfriend keeps me on hold to long i hang up on him...and you know what it works...he'll call right back wondering why you hung up...try this and see if it works!!!

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~


ShUgArHiGh
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since 2000-08-24
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2 posted 2000-08-25 11:44 AM


I thought that poem was very good! As for your boyfriend problem...Guys are so weird so the way he's acting might have absolutely nothing to do with you. If i were you i'd wait to see how things go at the party tonight. If  he acts normal then i wouldnt say anything cause it was probably nothing. If he acts the same as the last couple of times then wait till after the party and talk to him about it. I hope everything works out!
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3 posted 2000-08-25 06:48 PM


i think you should stop reading your boyfriend's mind.  Unless you really are good at it -- just kidding.  Don't be paranoid

As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

StarPryncess17
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4 posted 2000-08-26 07:17 PM


First off, don't assume anything.Maybe he was just in a weird mood...doesn't mean he's going to break up with you. If all you do is expect the worst, it soon may happen. And as for him putting you on hold forever, don't take that! If he wants to act shady well then whatever. I think you need to talk to him before the party. He's not going to want to have a serious conversation about you guys at his party. He won't be able to concentrate. Just tell him what it is that's on your mind. Don't hide your feelings...it'll all work out! Keep your head up! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~< !signature-->

~*~Why is it that love always
starts with a HuG
grows with a kIsS
and ends with a TeAr?!?~*~


[This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 08-26-2000).]

TopGunLauren
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5 posted 2000-08-26 07:21 PM


Great poem keep up the awsome work!
  Lauren

Lakewalker
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6 posted 2000-08-26 07:41 PM


This is such a great poem!  As for your situation, you're probably at the party right now so anything I say wouldn't help anyway.  I'd just like so point out that yes, us guys are weird, but I think you should just talk with your boyfriend and find out what's going on.
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