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ShUgArHiGh Junior Member
since 2000-08-24
Posts 24 |
We were once Friends,But then we became more. You finally ignored your feelings for me caused you loved her, So we went back to the way it was before. I thought i knew what i was doing, I thought i was in control, I thought i had gotten over you, But that wasnt it at all. I want all your feelings... The ones you dedicate to her. I'm the one who loves you, So i deserve you more! You say you love me, But only as a frend. But no..no..I cant let this happen again. I cant feel more. It just isnt right. I'm So confused... I know what i want, But it is in someone elses reach. My feelings can no be unleashed! I love hime more, It's so unfair! But his love for her, I am aware. So i sit there and smile, I listen to how much he loves her, Day after day... I wonder if his feelings for her will ever go away? And he'll feel that way about me, A feeling more than friendly. I love him and my love is true, So to prove my love this is what i'll have to do. Be happy for him cause he's w/his love, And let her continue to be the one he's dreaming of. |
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Joy Junior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 10 |
If this poem is about you, I can honestly say, I know how you feel. It takes a lot to be happy for the other person, but trust me, it gets easier with time. Good luck! Rhiana |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
I love your poem because I completely understand it keep up the great work! Lauren |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Very well-written poem! I know exactly what you're talking about. Hang in there! *~Meredith~* Somebody stop the world, I want to get off! *me |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
such a sticky situation. Loving someone who has feelings for someone else. I know all too well what this is all about. Just remember that if it was meant to be then it shall be. Keep your head up! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~Why is it that love always starts with a HuG grows with a kIsS and ends with a TeAr?!?~*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
You've put this difficult situation into words so well, this is a great poem. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
It's very noble to be happy for the one you love when they do not love you in return. This happens to so many of us. Wonderful work!  *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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X_me_X Junior Member
since 2000-08-18
Posts 37 |
wuz up this wus a great poem i can totally relate to it the first guy i ever loved wus actually a really good friend...and he had a gf and he wus like in LOVE with her...and she ddidnt appreciate him...man, it lasted for soooo long, my depression, my feelings... but it all turned out for the best..and take it from me, it gets better with time. sumtimes a freindship between 2 ppl is better than a relationship between the same two ppl. well, best of luck 2 ya! latez ~All is forgiven but NEVER forgotten~ |
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