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ShUgArHiGh
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since 2000-08-24
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0 posted 2000-08-24 09:32 PM


So Lucky...

Im so Lucky to have found a friend,
You know, the ones who always care?
Always listens to ur problems,
The ones who are always there?

He's the kind of friend,
I can always go to for a talk.
And if by chance i feel lonely,
He'll be by my side for an hour long walk.

We can stay up all night talking,
about one stupid thing.
Then as soon as i awake,
I cant wait to hear the phone ring.

I've never had a friend like him,
In my entire life.
But now that i'm lucky enough to have found him,
I never want him out of my sight.

He's my shoulder to cry on,
The friend that i truely love,
The angel that i believe god sent to me,
From way up above.

I want this friendship to last forever,
But nothing ever has.
For now i'll love each day like its our last,
And be so grateful for what i have.
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Lovely_Kris
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1 posted 2000-08-24 09:56 PM


wounderful poem and it is nice to have a friend who you can talk to and hang out with. It also sounds like your friend is a true friend. Keep up the great work and hope to read more.
LoveBug
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2 posted 2000-08-24 10:29 PM


This is a good poem, but I have to lock this because the author posted WAY too many poems in one day. If you have any questions, feel free to e-mail me or any of the other moderators. Thank you.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

DancinQueen
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3 posted 2000-12-17 12:19 PM


sorry i missed this   **bump**

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Dopey Dope
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4 posted 2000-12-17 08:12 PM


This was great......is this is the same guy who's your friend but you want to be MORE?
Anyway good one!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


Dopey Dope
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5 posted 2000-12-17 08:13 PM


This was great......is this is the same guy who's your friend but you want to be MORE?
Anyway good one!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


apsara
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since 2000-11-09
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6 posted 2000-12-18 05:06 AM


This has brought tears to my eyes. Yeah, i have this friend too like that. Wow you've described everything that I'm thinking of at this point. Yeah, we are lucky. Great read.

apsara

Lakewalker
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7 posted 2000-12-20 03:21 PM


Excellent job on this poem!  I see it's a few months old, how are things going now?

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Melster
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8 posted 2000-12-20 05:12 PM


Great poem!  I know how it feels to have someone like this - it is a great feeling!  I realise this is a little old, but don't ever be to keen to move things along with a great friend, it tends to complicate matters!  Trust me, I know!!

Melz!!


Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

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9 posted 2000-12-21 04:05 PM


Wow this is such an old poem!! Things are going well with the guy now..i dont know what is going to end up happening between us now but he wants to go out...all i know is i love him with all my heart..and even thats an understatement...i'll keep you guys updated!
Thanks for all the replies!!

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