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ShUgArHiGh
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0 posted 2000-08-24 09:30 PM


Your So Dense..


Depression...It's a funny thing in a way,
People are convinced that if u really want it to,
It'll all go away.
Its not just a state of mind,
But i guess u just cant see...
Your just to blind to look a little deeper,
and see the hurt inside of me.
I've done it all,
I've tried to change.
I even paid a psychologist who pretends to care,
To help me ease my pain.
But my life isnt going anywhere,
It's come to a halt.
I've fooled people into thinking im better,
Told people now when i look at myself,
I think im so great.
Well it's bull****,
It's all lies.
Dont you know that this is all a show i put on,
And inside all i do is cry?
No of course not,
You dont look deep enough.
All you see is the smile in which is my weapon to hide




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1 posted 2000-08-24 10:31 PM


This is a good poem, but I have to lock this because the author posted WAY too many poems in one day. If you have any questions, feel free to e-mail me or any of the other moderators. Thank you.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

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