navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #3 » Afraid...
Teen Poetry #3
Post A Reply Post New Topic Afraid... Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
ShUgArHiGh
Junior Member
since 2000-08-24
Posts 24


0 posted 2000-08-24 09:08 PM


Afraid..

I'm afraid  to say i like you,
What if you dont feel the same?
I'm afraid to try to be with you,
What if you turn and walk away?
I want to give my heart to you,
But what if cause of you it breaks?
Most of all, if there's anything i'm afraid to say,
And only because its true...
Is I love you,
Because that feeling will never go away.

© Copyright 2000 ShUgArHiGh - All Rights Reserved
thebeautybrat
Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 114
Florida
1 posted 2000-08-24 09:12 PM


Oh My Gosh!! I love this poem!! I have felt these exact words so many times in my life!! while i was reading i felt like you took the words right out of my mouth!! I loved this poem!! Good Job!!

<3 Hugz <3

Love is the greatest feeling of all...but heartbreak is the worst feeling you can imagine.


Lovely_Kris
Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176

2 posted 2000-08-24 10:10 PM


I love this poem and I think you did a great job expressing yuor feelings and I think i can relate to this poem. Thanks for sharing this poem and keep up the great work.
Lovely_Kris

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #3 » Afraid...

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary