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Who Truely Cares?
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Who Truely Cares? |
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ShUgArHiGh Junior Member
since 2000-08-24
Posts 24 |
Who truely cares?? I'm so tired of feeling lonely.. Being out with my friends at night.. The people i use to feel secure with, No longer feel so right. I feel so out of place, That no one really cares. I reach out to take someones hand, But no one is there. They say someone always cares, but where can that person be? I'm looking to find them, But they wont reveal themself to me. Sure i have friends, Friends that say they care and they'll always be there. But i cant trust them, There's things keeping me apart. For now i'll pretend as though i fit in, act as though im not sad. Wait for the ones that truely care, hopefully their out there....somewhere.. |
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thebeautybrat Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 114Florida |
Very beautiful poem!! this is kind of how i felt whenever i moved away from the place that i had lived all my life!! i think you have a lot of talent!! you should definitely keep writing!! Love is the greatest feeling of all...but heartbreak is the worst feeling you can imagine. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a good poem, but I have to lock this because the author posted WAY too many poems in one day. If you have any questions, feel free to e-mail me or any of the other moderators. Thank you. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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