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Kittie
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since 2000-07-08
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0 posted 2000-08-24 12:08 PM


"An Explanation from My Heart"

This comes from my heart,
to all of you that have read
the poem in it's sections
despite all that it says.
None of it is meant to be harmful,
simply something I felt important to share
for that I am an accident
I will always be there.
The names in which I am called
go further than what is displayed
yet my entire life contains them,
and cannot be erased.
So please be careful
in what response you have to give
because though the pain will never go
it is with the memory I must live
and wish you only to think wisely
through every word you say,
everyone is unique and important
even if you only find them in the way.





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Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-08-24 12:45 PM


kittie~~~this one is so good...i love it...you wrote some really good poems espically the ones i just read...keep up the good work...i cant wait to see more!!!

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~


sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
2 posted 2000-08-24 01:54 PM


Kittie,

I'm sorry that you were caused all this pain. Sometimes I feel that I'm an accident too, but not as severely treated as you were. This was a totally excellent display of hurt, fear, anger, and love. I absolutely loved this poem. Keep up the good work.

stay cool  

~~Lavada~~



"For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart some

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