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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
It was a night that we both fell in love I with your sensitive personality I with you beautiful smile I with you such care and caution I who also has been hurt before It was that night that we fell in love You with my eyes You with my caring heart You with my curious mind for a girl such as you You who was ready for aguy like me, and knew that I wasn't ready for a girl like you. It was the night that we both fell in love That was the night a mistake was made That night you gave to me what a lover was seeking That night you took away from me my heart and soul That night you were the one who had lost control That night babygirl you were truly the one that took away my soul. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
No other sting has a poison so fatal as love...the darker side. I hope you find someone to replace what has been stolen from you. Of course...I may have taken this the wrong way...but give a girl credit for trying.  Anyway, great poem! Angel Don't mess with the bull, young man. You'll get the horns. ~*Guardian of Light*~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
trueluv~~~i thought this poem was gonna end good but i was wrong...can i ask you something???why did you call this still waiting??? are you waiting for this girl to come back to you???i hope not...cuz the last lines didnt seem likes shes too nice...but i dont know her...good poem though...keep up the good work!!! ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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